You may possibly be my favorite person ever. I just loved the style of this, you know? It reads like nothing else out there... it's got a hint of class, like something you'd read from the mid 19th century, and yet it's mysterious. Like something you'd read in a Ray Bradbury collection of stories.
The way you turn a phrase is just wonderful. This paragraph is one I'm completely enamored of.
You could say that the Doctor used sympathetic magic to conjure the whole based on a part. You could say he journeyed into dark caves to find the amulets needed for his spell. You could say that he built himself a maiden like a fairy changeling from inanimate materials.
It's almost as brilliant as the dialogue towards the end, when the Doctor confesses his love for Rose.
“Waffles! Brilliant choice. Waffles it is, then. Waffles, syrup, a good hot cup of tea, some orange juice, and I love you,” the Doctor blurted out.
I was squeeing at the same time that my heart was twinging.
Wonderful job! I can't wait to reread the whole thing when you're finished.
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The way you turn a phrase is just wonderful. This paragraph is one I'm completely enamored of.
You could say that the Doctor used sympathetic magic to conjure the whole based on a part. You could say he journeyed into dark caves to find the amulets needed for his spell. You could say that he built himself a maiden like a fairy changeling from inanimate materials.
It's almost as brilliant as the dialogue towards the end, when the Doctor confesses his love for Rose.
“Waffles! Brilliant choice. Waffles it is, then. Waffles, syrup, a good hot cup of tea, some orange juice, and I love you,” the Doctor blurted out.
I was squeeing at the same time that my heart was twinging.
Wonderful job! I can't wait to reread the whole thing when you're finished.