I'm slightly behind the times on this meme, but I wanted to get "Path of Needles" posted completely first.

Request any fic of mine and I will provide you with a commentary/annotations, like a DVD extra.

For your convenience, my fic is collected here.  Like most of the many people I've ganked this meme from, if you want a longer work (err, that's most of them) please request a specific chapter or two.  If I get momentum going I might well end up doing commentary for the rest of the story too, but no promises beyond a chapter or two per request.